Hi Everyone and welcome to Six Sentence Sunday. This week l'm going to use a snippet from 'Naked Moon'
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The following day was Saturday and therefore a day off for her. Joe shut himself away in the small box bedroom he had claimed as an office, whilst Natalie cleaned the house until boredom set in. Looking out from the upstairs window she noticed one of her new neighbors standing in the garden. It was a young man, around twenty four, tall and lean, soft brown hair and a happy easy face, his smile slightly crooked and his eyes intense.
He was talking on his mobile phone. Glancing upwards he noticed her and waved, Natalie waved back then quickly removed herself from sight, her face slightly flushed.
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Happy Sunday
Gemma
Flushed from tantalizing thoughts? Nice descriptions. I could "see" what she saw.
ReplyDeleteoh oh oh..handsome friendly neighbour, Great six.
ReplyDeleteOhhh...a voyeur moment? Love those hidden scenes, especially when they get caught
ReplyDeleteDawne P
A handsome young man is definitely flush worthy!
ReplyDeleteUh-oh. Trouble's coming.
ReplyDeleteIf she gets warm with just a look from this guy, I bet the temperature's really going to rise when they finally get together! Tantalizing six.
ReplyDeleteVery descriptive and Ima thinking she is gonna get some of that tall and lean, Gemma:) xo
ReplyDeleteVery descriptive. Ima thinking she is gonna get herself soma that tall and lean, Gemma:) xo
ReplyDeleteohh, very intriguing!
ReplyDeleteFun six! Definitely caught my attention. :)
ReplyDeleteFun six! Made me smile! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat six. You gave us a glimpse of a bland marriage and potential excitement next door in so few sentence.
ReplyDeleteIntriguing 6! :D
ReplyDeleteOh no, trouble! Hard to resist a temptation like that one...
ReplyDeleteHello, fortuitous neighbor! Nice to meetcha! Great six.
ReplyDeleteOh, sounds like the beginning of something. There's definitely more to the story with her flushing. :)
ReplyDeleteWhen something that innocent leaves you flushed, there's always interesting things down the line! :)
ReplyDelete~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS
Hehe he sounds like trouble. Always gotta watch out for the cute ones.
ReplyDeleteThanks as always for your brilliant comments, much appreciated!
ReplyDeleteOoh, I love the domestic discontent!
ReplyDeleteHot young neighbor, bored house wife? It may be trouble but it'll be trouble worth paying for. Dance with the devil baby, pay the fiddler for the sweet music he makes. Good six.
ReplyDeleteOh, I see trouble on the horizon in that household....what fun! Great six.
ReplyDeleteGreat descriptive 6 :)
ReplyDeleteOooh...I feel something brewing. Bored house wife? Hot young neighbor boy? That's a recipe for naughty times. Loved the six.
ReplyDeleteI see a menage in a bored housewife's future.....Great six Gemma!!
ReplyDeleteLoved that he waves!! Lol
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